Proof-reading EG

[Avengium]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2ad0f11181
9999 AT to Present: (Current Era)

I agree that parts of the Current Era article don't really fit with our encyclopedia style, but don't have time to rewrite the article just now. Maybe someone else would like to take a shot at this?

Thanks!

Todd

My attempt at rewriting that section:

The Current Era is one in which there has never been such stability at home and yet, paradoxically, such instability. The old Inner Sphere archailects still rule over all as Olympian deities with nodes of computronium, reigning over countless different cultures and clades. But some of the sophonts of the Inner Sphere are worried that in the process of reorganizing and assimilating larger stretches of newly claimed space, and coming to terms with an increasing number of new emerging Archailects, Ascends, and Transcends in the Outer Volumes and along the Periphery, the Sephirotic archailects may reorganize things and do some fancy ascensions or transcensions that might just absorb ordinary sophonts as a side-effect. Most believe that they wouldn't do any such thing, but they certainly could if they wished to.

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This is a growing period of uncertainty. The Emple-dokcetics emerge as a major culture/House/empire, along the lines of Metasoft. Metasoft is already starting to decline because their standard is starting to fall out of favour. Cygexba is no longer an empire and the STC (Sagittarius Transcultural Cooperation) is being threatened by the new emerging polities on the Periphery. The Paradigm might be brewing some "offspring expansion spheres" in the periphery, the Amalgamation is awaiting to launch the next assault, scheming. The NoCoZo is analizing the situation with an eye on the profit , while, Keter is not interested in much of these conflicts (apparently). A few sporadic Daharrans are still managing to let loose fanatics with system-wrecking weaponry, Jean Te Uahlg Aestheticism might be the next big thing and the Caretaker Gods have begun to get irritated over the number of exploding/imploding stars, ecologies converted to nanostuff and the general messiness of things.

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This is an attempt to try to correct in 9999 to Present Era.