03-29-2018, 09:20 AM
(02-22-2018, 04:27 PM)Crossroads Wrote: PhobosI've edited all these - thanks! I think that with a conversion drive, Phobos might bbe able to reach Proxima, so I've changed it to that. After such a journey the main bulk of Phobos would probably be missing, converted into conversion fuel and propellant.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4c99cf94829c4
-2nd par., informorphs should be infomorphs
-4th par., starts with "For During"
-243 BT in timeline: Demios should be Deimos
-AD dates need to be changed to CE, including the 1988 entry
-The Fobos-Grunt mission failed, should be removed
-The manned Mars mission in 57 AT contradicts the timeline as given elsewhere in the EG, should be 68 AT.
-652 AT, amat should not be in all caps
-Would Phobos really be able to visit other star systems in the time available?