Proof-reading EG

[Rynn]

Before I do that, since it is a somewhat big change and has to do with canon, I would like confirmation from an admin. Are we supposed to change sentient to sophont in that article?

For the bill yes but I'd leave the protocol unchanged, AIUI the protocol isn't just about sophonts but any sentient being (e.g. animals, pre-sophont bots etc). They're a more complex concept related to ontologies that define appropriate behaviours relative to the sentience of the entities in question. Rather than just a straight swap at the name if anyone thinks there should be a change it can be discussed in its own thread.