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(08-27-2016, 09:34 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b3bbdc13805
Interstellar Trade

down at the very bottom, the link
http://eg.orionsarm.com/fm_store/RTTCalc.htm
Relativity Calculator

generates the error message

Server not found
Firefox can't find the server at eg.orionsarm.com.
I think that's Fendy's calculator; I've misplaced it at the moment, but I'm still in touch with him via Facebook - perhaps he has a newer version to upload.
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Void Pocket, Void Swarm, Virds and Vats, Ship Design: Shielding all updated.
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The link to the Relativity Calculator on this page is still working. You can probably replace the broken link using the working one.

Thanks!

Todd
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464ce0b60796c

will attached itself to you
should be
will attach itself to you
Selden
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(08-28-2016, 08:24 AM)Drashner1 Wrote: The link to the Relativity Calculator on this page is still working. You can probably replace the broken link using the working one.

Todd
Done; thanks!
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4d1d3d7b2fbff
Laundry, The

they prefers to be buried
should be
they prefer to be buried

as well non-spherical forms
should be
as well as non-spherical forms
Selden
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(08-28-2016, 08:33 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464ce0b60796c

will attached itself to you
should be
will attach itself to you

Page amended- thanks!
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4847348d6e46c
Known Net, The

icon may actually a spy program
should be
icon may actually be a spy program

That is why the Known Net was diminished by the Version War and other catastrophes and alarms that have shaken the Nexus, even if it was slowed for a while.
might be better as
That is why the Known Net has been only temporarily diminished by the Version War and other catastrophes and alarms that have shaken the Nexus. They have slowed the Net only for a while.
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/49c3de46a2d1d
God Web, The

who feared it may be used by Revisionist forces
should be
who feared it might be used by Revisionist forces
(past tense)
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/5453bc1f74965
Effector Frame

"Smart quotes" messing up: I see a white question-mark in a black diamond instead of an apostrophe or quotes.

a sophont�s torso
should be
a sophont's torso

the user�s DNI
should be
the user's DNI

provide yet more �hands� when required
should be
provide yet more "hands" when required
Selden
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