05-12-2016, 06:03 AM
If you can, please copy/paste a copy of the story into this thread. That way we can point to specific bits that need tweaking 'on site' rather than having to throw longs lists of issues at you in the abstract.
I think many of these issues can be dealt with fairly easily and with only minor changes - a word removed here, a phrase added there.
Also, can you provide some additional background for the universe you are creating here? You've mentioned a fictional setting that the story is based in a couple of times. Does the story take place in this setting, or is it inspired by the setting, or is the setting still in your head and the story is part of bringing into existence?
A link is good, or a summary of the kind of world this is (or both) would be good to provide backstory and context.
Thanks!
Todd
I think many of these issues can be dealt with fairly easily and with only minor changes - a word removed here, a phrase added there.
Also, can you provide some additional background for the universe you are creating here? You've mentioned a fictional setting that the story is based in a couple of times. Does the story take place in this setting, or is it inspired by the setting, or is the setting still in your head and the story is part of bringing into existence?
A link is good, or a summary of the kind of world this is (or both) would be good to provide backstory and context.
Thanks!
Todd