10-16-2016, 01:41 PM
Hmm. Reading thru The Rise of Homo Superior article more fully, I am seeing a number of issues that are likely to drive at least some rewites and possibly some extensive ones.
Specifically, there is the issue of the article being overtaken by RL history, the dates and timeline in the article not lining up with the revised timeline (we moved a lot of biotechnology further into the future IIRC), contradictory terminology between the article and the rest of the EG (I don't think we use Tweak this way anywhere else in the EG), and some possible issues with concepts in the article. What is a tweak run corporation and how would that happen at this point in the timeline, for example?
Things to discuss, I think.
Todd
Specifically, there is the issue of the article being overtaken by RL history, the dates and timeline in the article not lining up with the revised timeline (we moved a lot of biotechnology further into the future IIRC), contradictory terminology between the article and the rest of the EG (I don't think we use Tweak this way anywhere else in the EG), and some possible issues with concepts in the article. What is a tweak run corporation and how would that happen at this point in the timeline, for example?
Things to discuss, I think.
Todd