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Project Heavenstorm (Chapter One of my novel)
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Yes, definitely switch the scene with daal savathar and the battle with that good guys talking about stuff.
I like this introduction to a story if it starts with the bad villains and a dragon Air Force
And THEN goes to the university
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RE: Project Heavenstorm (Chapter One of my novel) - by Dfleymmes1134 - 11-14-2019, 12:51 PM

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