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I remember the Ousters; they aren't really all that much different from the Hiders or Backgrounders- the closest analog might be the Deeper Covenant. I'll just remove the reference.
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Collective Mind Societies

critics to the collective mind model of the Amalgamation has also questioned\
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critics to the collective mind model of the Amalgamation have also questioned

the collective externally may appears to grow more diverse it internally tends to fairly quickly
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externally the collective may appear to grow more diverse internally it tends to fairly quickly
Selden
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Supporting Minds in the Red Star M'Pire

computronium has allow these third toposophic
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computronium has allowed these third toposophic

improve and expand the contacts Per developed among the fourth singularity beings
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improve and expand the contacts Per had developed among the fourth singularity beings
Selden
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Red Star 'M'pire

and consoling both during the process
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and counseling both during the process

(although those who fail to achieve their goals doubtless need consoling, too.)

a star with it's own Dyson node.
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a star with its own Dyson node.
Selden
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Hellfire Expansion, The

most of the pioneers origin from NoCoZo
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most of the pioneers originate from NoCoZo


http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/491232472b626
Tabridgen

re-biosphere schemes fro those whose habs
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re-biosphere schemes for those whose habs
Selden
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Fixed; thanks!
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Hi, i think this article: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47a53c6e7b8a2 Transhuman needs hyperlinks.
I suggest [[posthuman]], [[transhumanism]], [[ascend]] and [[memetics]].

Regards, Angel. Big Grin
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Hi, i think i found a lapsus in this: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/573b16276c2ee EmotSpace Virchworlds
"This has a few consequences, including that no two sophonts can ever have exactly the same emotional state in these four metrics,"
6 emotions, 6 dimensions, not four. Smile
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Both fixed; thanks!
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/483aec8a1fb1b Virtual Gardens
"providing a outlet for baseline and near baseline creativity that has often become discouraged by interactions with higher topographic beings."
Topographic -> toposophic.
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