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#51
(03-03-2015, 11:32 PM)chris0033547 Wrote: The article on nanobots has a minor typo:

Quote:[..]have an internal power source can access external power such as light such as light or chemical fuels[..]

Fixed. Thanks!
Stephen
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#52
AreanTundral worlds

Quote:Stellar proximity(!) typically leaves these worlds quite frigid.
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#53
I think that John means 'the distance between the star and the planet'; proximity is not exactly wrong, but it is misleading. Fixed.
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#54
There's a repeat of words in the following article:

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/462d995c13c9e

Quote:[..]highly dense materials such as such as magmatter[..]

Should the following be fixed as well?

Quote:[..]evolve towards an Omega Point[..]
"Hydrogen is a light, odorless gas, which, given enough time, turns into people." -- Edward Robert Harrison
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#55
Fixed and fixed. Thanks.
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#56
The following article contains a repetition of words:

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4a140a5766bf7

Quote:[..]and generally is generally running at least 100 classes on various subjects every day.

A small typo:

Quote:The facility is maintained by subsapient vecs commonly known at "the staff".
"Hydrogen is a light, odorless gas, which, given enough time, turns into people." -- Edward Robert Harrison
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#57
Fixed - thanks.
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#58
First Federation of Hu and AI, The

Quote:The assimilation of the countless millions descended from human refugees that in the Great Expulsion — some inhabiting the hulks of the old O'Neill orbitals, others in biospheres scattered throughout the solar system &mdash caused serious problems for the Federation.
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#59
Fixed - That's the dreaded encoding bug, usually caused by copy-and-paste from Microsoft Word.
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#60
From the triangulum transmission page

Quote:While day-to-day decisions are made by the soophonts themselves
OA Wish list:
  1. DNI
  2. Internal medical system
  3. A dormbot, because domestic chores suck!
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