Proof-reading EG

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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4802acd634205

First discovered when it was still a over a million light-years from the edge of their galaxy

http://orionsarm.com/eg-article/48f7d26295d0f

The above article is "plagued" by a weird series of symbols which appear to be almost everythere. It's scary. Here's an example:

At first all available high technology was used � shuttles, robotic building, expert systems and biotech.

As I said this isn't the only occurrence. Then there is this sentence:

Adonis is a semi-secret group of male rights activists, working against the Mothers.

The Adonis-link in this sentence leads to an extremely short EG entry consisting of exactly one sentence and it appears that the explanation for Adonis in that EG entry doesn't match the explanation for Adonis in the New Gaia EG entry. It doesn't make sense to me. Both EG entries seem to talk about different Adonis groups unless of course the Adonis group on New Gaia has a long off-world history? But this history isn't explained in the New Gaia article and it isn't mentioned in the one-sentence-Adonis-article.

note: Gaianese is spoken by primitivist Gaian society only - the Technopolises speak a have a different dialect

http://orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cbca2e75287

In 3039 a.t. the <{A49addd86dfb82,Compact of Eden}> was announced by the representatives of the AI Gods.