Proof-reading EG

[Matterplay1]

I've updated the New Gaia article somewhat-
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48f7d26295d0f

and added a new image. Are there any other edits to the content that might be made?

Nice image. I'll put my article on the list for an an 'cleanup' edit, and if I have any content suggestions in that I'll mention them here. Anybody else who has suggestions, please float them here in the next couple of days too & I'll look to integrating those if there's agreement on them.

[chris0033547]

Nice image, Steve. Here are two more articles which need some tweaking:

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47fc30971c3c5

For example A superior who takes up running will rapidly adapt to a level of cardiovascular fitness rivaling that of the best marathoner.

Here's a formatting error; I think that the newline after felinoid should be deleted:

felinoid
vertical pupils

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47fc2ccba05bf

only a fee for the the splicing was charged

A generation of superbabies were growing up into child entrepreneurs are forcing big changes

A formatting error involving a superfluous whitespace:

as generally attempted in mainstream efforts , weightlessness

especially the SMI²LEs

Is the following orange word really correct? Shouldn't it be gengineered?

the GeneTEK faction had geneered their own deep-space subspecies

[stevebowers]

I think geneered is a synonym, rather than an error.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/464e8e23a8b54
I personally prefer it as a word, but it is just a little less clear than the alternative.

[PortalHunter]

The Chameleon

The largest face is 2599 meters across, the smallest 2931 meters.

Should be switched around.

[Drashner1]

The Chameleon

The largest face is 2599 meters across, the smallest 2931 meters.

Should be switched around.

Fixed

Todd

[chris0033547]

The Interplanetary Age article references itself:

The Interplanetary Age had begun.

(It's an active link in the article.)

[stevebowers]

Yeah, that should probably be the Interplanetary Era. Amended.

[Cray]

Trivia:
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/460c3aec50c95

"Formerly extinct terragen gymnosperms that superficially resemble cycads, but reproduce more like flowering pants."

I think that should be "pLants."

[stevebowers]

Heh heh - fixed.

[PortalHunter]

Solsys

The 'more info here' link for the Asteroid Belt leads to the Mars article. It should lead here instead.