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Quote:The Metasoft article also says that Dilmun is 2097 ly away, whilst Dilmun's article says it's 2101 ly away.
This is probably a rounding error in Celestia. A bit large for an epochal adjustment.
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I was just reading through the Current Era timeline - there are a few chronological errors in it, i.e. the Pas'utu'ril signal is discovered in 10532, but it's after an event in 10552.
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Fixed (I think).
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Check out the page on the early First Federation. On the second line, there should be a space between "the" and "First Federation". ;p
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Fixed. I've seen a few of these recently - something to do with the link.
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Similar issue on the page for the Internet War. May wanna check it out - "ormegacorps".
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Few more things I noticed:

Under "Xenoprovolve" - "theUtopia Sphere" - needs a space

This is just a suggestion - I feel that "Walking Mountains" should be under the Xenoprovolve page only, because they're of non-Terragen origin.

Also, Tiger Splices are under the Provolve page - I'm not sure why, because they're splices, as opposed to provolves.
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All issues in Post #166 and 167 have now been fixed.

Todd
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Another thing I noticed today:

On the Gaian Type article, it seems that the PostGaian link actually links to the Bathypelagic subtype.
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(10-11-2015, 09:13 PM)Centauri5921 Wrote: Another thing I noticed today:

On the Gaian Type article, it seems that the PostGaian link actually links to the Bathypelagic subtype.

Fixed. Thanks!
Stephen
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