08-06-2016, 07:59 AM
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45bcc0ea9004c
The first paragraph of the Outer Volumes article seems to be missing some text and part of a paragraph break seems to be missing at its end. Currently it ends with
"It is poorly (and often not at all) served by stargates, and for the most part the great powers only local jurisdictions or spheres of influence within its vastness."
After rereading it several times, I finally came to the conclusion that there's at least a "have" missing. It might have been intended to say something like
"It is poorly (and often not at all) served by stargates, and for the most part the great powers [have] only [relatively small] local jurisdictions or spheres of influence within its vastness."
(without the [ ] brackets, which I inserted only to emphasize my suggestions.)
Also, there's no blank line between the end of that first paragraph and the start of the second, as there is between all of the other paragraphs.
The first paragraph of the Outer Volumes article seems to be missing some text and part of a paragraph break seems to be missing at its end. Currently it ends with
"It is poorly (and often not at all) served by stargates, and for the most part the great powers only local jurisdictions or spheres of influence within its vastness."
After rereading it several times, I finally came to the conclusion that there's at least a "have" missing. It might have been intended to say something like
"It is poorly (and often not at all) served by stargates, and for the most part the great powers [have] only [relatively small] local jurisdictions or spheres of influence within its vastness."
(without the [ ] brackets, which I inserted only to emphasize my suggestions.)
Also, there's no blank line between the end of that first paragraph and the start of the second, as there is between all of the other paragraphs.
Selden