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Proof-reading EG
(08-07-2016, 03:07 AM)Matterplay1 Wrote: I'll fix up the bit you mentioned, of course, but it also appears we've some other material from the old version that was deleted in an earlier edit. Obviously it needs a bit of updating (no picotech now), but I suggest we reintroduce it in modified form.

Agreed that this needs some updating and polishing. Along with removing picotech, I'd also suggest removing or replacing a lot of the 'classic space opera' elements, such as:

a) The OV is poor in resource and industrial base and backwards technologically - this doesn't really fit with our current take on both the slow rate of tech advance in the setting and the ability of a very compact (but self-replicating) starting unit to essentially industrialize an entire solar system with minimal fuss. The old economic idea of needing some central source of raw materials and know how to bootstrap up from is passe in OA. It might work better (if this is to remain at all) to make it more of an issue of getting enough transapients on hand (immigrants or home grown) to support the sort of transapientech infrastructures and products that are more readily available in the Inner Sphere and low Middle Regions.

b) The OV inhabitants are looked down upon by the Inner Sphere folk - this might work to some degree, but needs to be toned down a good bit. Better yet, altered or combined with something more uniquely OA. Perhaps it's a matter of the OV struggling to develop the memetic infrastructures that allow so many diverse beings to so readily and easily work together to make a civilization in the various Sephirotics or the like.

c) I'd also suggest adjusting the statements about the OV being 'ignored' by the 'leaders of the Inner Sphere' - given that those leaders are archailects, it seems unlikely they are ignoring the OV - and also out of character given the way we generally describe archailect behavior. Perhaps something combining elements of both the distances involved and the rather murky plans and motivations of transapients might be a better explanation here.

My 2c worth,

Todd
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Proof-reading EG - by xilman - 12-31-2013, 07:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-31-2013, 08:03 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-01-2014, 12:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-24-2014, 03:28 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by A. J. Garth - 03-24-2014, 01:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-24-2014, 08:38 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-25-2014, 12:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-25-2014, 12:38 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by A. J. Garth - 03-26-2014, 08:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-26-2014, 10:05 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by A. J. Garth - 04-12-2014, 01:15 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 04-13-2014, 02:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-29-2015, 11:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 01-29-2015, 07:33 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-29-2015, 09:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 01-29-2015, 09:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-29-2015, 11:32 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 01-29-2015, 09:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 01-29-2015, 09:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-29-2015, 09:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 01-29-2015, 09:51 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-29-2015, 11:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 01-29-2015, 11:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 01-30-2015, 05:22 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-30-2015, 07:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-30-2015, 07:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by FrodoGoofball - 01-30-2015, 05:51 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-30-2015, 06:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 02-11-2015, 09:03 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers. - 02-12-2015, 03:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 02-11-2015, 09:41 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 02-12-2015, 01:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 02-12-2015, 07:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-12-2015, 01:41 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 02-12-2015, 09:28 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 02-12-2015, 09:45 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-13-2015, 03:57 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-13-2015, 07:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 02-13-2015, 07:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-13-2015, 10:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 02-14-2015, 12:26 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 02-14-2015, 09:21 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-15-2015, 02:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 02-15-2015, 03:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 02-15-2015, 04:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 02-15-2015, 05:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 02-28-2015, 11:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-28-2015, 01:30 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by chris0033547 - 03-03-2015, 11:32 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-04-2015, 01:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 03-08-2015, 12:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-08-2015, 05:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by chris0033547 - 03-31-2015, 04:35 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-31-2015, 06:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by chris0033547 - 04-08-2015, 04:47 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-08-2015, 05:40 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 04-20-2015, 10:32 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-21-2015, 04:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 04-23-2015, 06:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-23-2015, 07:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by chris0033547 - 05-03-2015, 02:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-03-2015, 05:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 05-13-2015, 06:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-13-2015, 06:32 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 05-13-2015, 07:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 05-13-2015, 12:45 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Cray - 05-14-2015, 09:58 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-15-2015, 02:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by CptnMus - 05-19-2015, 09:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 05-19-2015, 11:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 05-24-2015, 01:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 05-24-2015, 07:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 05-26-2015, 03:23 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by CptnMus - 05-27-2015, 12:35 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 05-29-2015, 12:24 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by chris0033547 - 06-01-2015, 06:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-01-2015, 08:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-02-2015, 06:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 06-02-2015, 07:39 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 06-02-2015, 10:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by chris0033547 - 06-02-2015, 06:25 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-02-2015, 09:08 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 06-03-2015, 05:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-03-2015, 12:20 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by chris0033547 - 06-09-2015, 04:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-09-2015, 08:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Cray - 06-12-2015, 10:13 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-14-2015, 01:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 06-20-2015, 04:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-20-2015, 10:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 06-23-2015, 06:33 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 06-23-2015, 02:08 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 06-25-2015, 02:47 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-25-2015, 09:28 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 06-26-2015, 04:56 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-13-2015, 11:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 07-02-2015, 07:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-03-2015, 03:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-03-2015, 03:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 07-08-2015, 07:48 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-13-2015, 11:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 07-11-2015, 03:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-11-2015, 05:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 07-15-2015, 04:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 07-15-2015, 10:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 07-22-2015, 06:26 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-22-2015, 06:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-23-2015, 09:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Ithuriel - 07-24-2015, 06:43 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-24-2015, 08:16 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QueElEs - 07-27-2015, 09:44 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-27-2015, 10:52 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 07-28-2015, 02:47 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-28-2015, 04:29 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Cray - 07-28-2015, 11:55 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-29-2015, 01:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-29-2015, 01:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Cray - 07-29-2015, 01:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Cray - 07-30-2015, 07:57 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-30-2015, 08:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 08-31-2015, 06:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 08-31-2015, 02:20 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-01-2015, 01:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-01-2015, 06:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-01-2015, 06:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-12-2015, 08:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-12-2015, 10:04 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-13-2015, 08:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-16-2015, 01:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-17-2015, 12:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-19-2015, 07:43 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 09-19-2015, 11:34 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-20-2015, 12:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-20-2015, 10:39 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-21-2015, 12:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-21-2015, 12:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-21-2015, 02:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-22-2015, 07:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-22-2015, 11:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-28-2015, 06:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-29-2015, 04:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 09-29-2015, 09:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-29-2015, 10:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 09-29-2015, 10:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 09-29-2015, 10:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-29-2015, 10:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-29-2015, 10:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-30-2015, 02:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-30-2015, 03:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 09-30-2015, 05:34 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-01-2015, 06:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-01-2015, 09:33 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-01-2015, 11:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-01-2015, 01:46 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-04-2015, 03:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-04-2015, 11:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-04-2015, 12:04 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-04-2015, 10:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-04-2015, 11:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-05-2015, 02:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-07-2015, 04:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-08-2015, 01:00 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-09-2015, 10:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-10-2015, 05:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-10-2015, 07:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-10-2015, 10:07 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-11-2015, 12:07 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-11-2015, 09:13 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 10-12-2015, 02:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by tmazanec1 - 10-12-2015, 03:13 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-12-2015, 05:11 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-14-2015, 10:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-14-2015, 06:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-14-2015, 07:22 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by tmazanec1 - 10-15-2015, 12:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-15-2015, 05:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by tmazanec1 - 10-15-2015, 08:44 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-16-2015, 12:21 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-18-2015, 02:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-18-2015, 04:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 10-23-2015, 01:05 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-23-2015, 07:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-23-2015, 10:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-23-2015, 03:36 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-26-2015, 08:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 10-26-2015, 02:06 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-26-2015, 10:20 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 10-27-2015, 03:14 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-01-2015, 05:24 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-01-2015, 06:04 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-05-2015, 11:49 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-06-2015, 12:28 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-16-2015, 09:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 12-16-2015, 09:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-16-2015, 09:40 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 12-16-2015, 09:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-17-2015, 02:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 12-17-2015, 08:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-17-2015, 09:39 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QueElEs - 12-17-2015, 06:56 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-17-2015, 10:35 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-18-2015, 06:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-18-2015, 07:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-18-2015, 07:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-18-2015, 07:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-19-2015, 12:32 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-19-2015, 06:58 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by chris0033547 - 12-19-2015, 08:59 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 12-21-2015, 04:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 12-20-2015, 11:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 12-21-2015, 03:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 12-23-2015, 01:25 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-20-2015, 09:55 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-20-2015, 10:47 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-21-2015, 01:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-21-2015, 02:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 12-21-2015, 05:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 12-21-2015, 08:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-21-2015, 08:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-23-2015, 04:28 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 12-23-2015, 05:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 12-24-2015, 01:35 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by radtech497 - 12-24-2015, 07:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-24-2015, 09:01 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 12-25-2015, 06:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 12-25-2015, 09:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-25-2015, 10:04 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 12-26-2015, 05:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 12-28-2015, 03:05 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-01-2016, 02:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Cray - 01-05-2016, 06:22 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-05-2016, 06:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 01-07-2016, 02:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-07-2016, 04:27 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 01-08-2016, 02:07 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-13-2016, 01:58 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QueElEs - 01-12-2016, 11:53 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-13-2016, 01:53 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 01-15-2016, 11:04 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-15-2016, 01:26 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 01-16-2016, 09:56 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-18-2016, 04:06 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QueElEs - 01-17-2016, 10:11 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-18-2016, 04:58 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QueElEs - 01-19-2016, 12:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-21-2016, 10:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 01-21-2016, 08:01 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-21-2016, 11:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 01-21-2016, 12:04 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-21-2016, 06:26 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 01-24-2016, 03:05 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-25-2016, 01:51 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 01-25-2016, 09:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 01-26-2016, 07:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-26-2016, 08:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-26-2016, 01:21 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-27-2016, 07:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by PortalHunter - 02-14-2016, 06:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-14-2016, 07:14 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 02-20-2016, 11:40 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-21-2016, 12:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by m.ellis - 03-03-2016, 02:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 03-03-2016, 02:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by m.ellis - 03-04-2016, 02:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 03-20-2016, 01:38 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-29-2016, 05:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 06-29-2016, 04:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-29-2016, 05:24 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-29-2016, 09:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 05:26 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-24-2016, 11:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 05:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-24-2016, 11:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 07:37 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 06:22 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-24-2016, 11:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 06:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-24-2016, 12:05 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 06:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-24-2016, 12:14 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 07:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 07:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-24-2016, 12:23 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 08:19 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-25-2016, 02:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 09:03 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-24-2016, 11:36 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-25-2016, 08:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-24-2016, 11:38 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-25-2016, 06:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-25-2016, 08:14 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-26-2016, 05:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 07-26-2016, 06:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-26-2016, 11:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-01-2016, 12:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-01-2016, 09:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-06-2016, 07:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 08-07-2016, 03:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-07-2016, 01:15 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-08-2016, 08:05 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 08-09-2016, 01:55 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-07-2016, 05:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-07-2016, 01:02 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-07-2016, 07:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-07-2016, 12:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-08-2016, 06:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-15-2016, 07:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-08-2016, 06:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-08-2016, 06:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-09-2016, 08:39 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-11-2016, 08:31 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-11-2016, 11:03 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-11-2016, 11:35 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-15-2016, 08:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-13-2016, 02:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-14-2016, 09:56 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 08-15-2016, 07:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-15-2016, 08:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 08-15-2016, 08:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-14-2016, 10:05 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 08-15-2016, 07:51 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-15-2016, 08:39 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-14-2016, 10:26 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-15-2016, 08:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-15-2016, 08:04 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 08-15-2016, 08:57 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-14-2016, 11:06 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-16-2016, 12:15 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-15-2016, 06:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-15-2016, 06:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-15-2016, 08:04 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-17-2016, 01:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-17-2016, 05:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-17-2016, 01:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-17-2016, 05:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-17-2016, 02:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-17-2016, 05:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-17-2016, 02:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-17-2016, 05:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-17-2016, 03:01 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-17-2016, 06:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-17-2016, 06:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-17-2016, 10:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 08-17-2016, 06:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-17-2016, 07:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-17-2016, 08:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-17-2016, 08:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-17-2016, 07:46 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-19-2016, 11:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-19-2016, 04:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-19-2016, 04:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by 1of3 - 08-23-2016, 06:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-23-2016, 08:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-26-2016, 06:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-26-2016, 07:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-26-2016, 07:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-26-2016, 07:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-26-2016, 07:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-26-2016, 08:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-26-2016, 08:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-26-2016, 10:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-26-2016, 11:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-26-2016, 08:57 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-26-2016, 10:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-26-2016, 09:38 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-27-2016, 02:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-27-2016, 03:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-27-2016, 03:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-27-2016, 04:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 08-27-2016, 05:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-27-2016, 06:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-27-2016, 07:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-27-2016, 07:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-27-2016, 08:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-27-2016, 09:34 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-28-2016, 07:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-27-2016, 09:48 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-27-2016, 09:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-27-2016, 10:55 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-28-2016, 01:33 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-28-2016, 07:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 08-28-2016, 08:24 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-28-2016, 09:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-28-2016, 08:33 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-28-2016, 09:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-28-2016, 09:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-29-2016, 12:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-29-2016, 12:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-30-2016, 02:00 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-30-2016, 02:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-31-2016, 01:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-31-2016, 01:57 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-31-2016, 02:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-31-2016, 05:29 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-31-2016, 04:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 02:17 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-31-2016, 04:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-31-2016, 04:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-31-2016, 08:50 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-31-2016, 08:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-31-2016, 09:15 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-31-2016, 09:38 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 09-06-2016, 11:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-02-2016, 09:36 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 11:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 09-06-2016, 11:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-02-2016, 10:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 11:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-03-2016, 12:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 11:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-03-2016, 12:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 11:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-03-2016, 12:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 02:21 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-03-2016, 12:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 02:25 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-03-2016, 01:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 02:36 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-03-2016, 01:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 02:53 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-03-2016, 01:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 09-06-2016, 10:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 10:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 10:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-04-2016, 09:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 09-06-2016, 10:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-04-2016, 10:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 09-06-2016, 10:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 10:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-06-2016, 08:20 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-04-2016, 11:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-04-2016, 08:56 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-06-2016, 09:04 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-06-2016, 10:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-16-2016, 12:19 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 09-18-2016, 02:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-28-2016, 08:50 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-28-2016, 08:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-29-2016, 12:33 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-30-2016, 12:09 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-30-2016, 02:22 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Centauri5921 - 10-03-2016, 03:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-03-2016, 03:33 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by terrafamilia - 11-01-2016, 10:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 11-01-2016, 10:34 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 11-08-2016, 11:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 11-18-2016, 10:22 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 11-18-2016, 10:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 11-19-2016, 12:01 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 11-19-2016, 12:57 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 11-29-2016, 08:19 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 11-29-2016, 09:19 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 11-29-2016, 09:49 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 12-08-2016, 07:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-08-2016, 07:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 12-08-2016, 09:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 12-17-2016, 05:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-28-2016, 12:59 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 01-11-2017, 11:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-11-2017, 11:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 01-15-2017, 02:40 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-16-2017, 02:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017, 04:32 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017, 05:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017, 05:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-17-2017, 05:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017, 12:08 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017, 12:49 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-17-2017, 10:37 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-17-2017, 02:39 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-17-2017, 11:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 01-18-2017, 08:47 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-18-2017, 10:30 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-19-2017, 03:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-19-2017, 04:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-19-2017, 03:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 01-20-2017, 01:53 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-20-2017, 05:51 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-26-2017, 05:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-26-2017, 06:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-26-2017, 09:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-27-2017, 01:34 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-27-2017, 01:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-27-2017, 05:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-27-2017, 08:35 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-27-2017, 12:56 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-28-2017, 12:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-27-2017, 01:22 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-27-2017, 01:37 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-27-2017, 01:47 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-27-2017, 06:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-27-2017, 07:06 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 01-27-2017, 07:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-28-2017, 12:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-28-2017, 12:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-31-2017, 02:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-28-2017, 12:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-28-2017, 02:21 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-28-2017, 05:39 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-29-2017, 04:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-31-2017, 02:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-29-2017, 04:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-29-2017, 04:47 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-30-2017, 03:03 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-31-2017, 02:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 01-30-2017, 08:46 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-31-2017, 02:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 01-31-2017, 01:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 01-31-2017, 02:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 01-31-2017, 02:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-31-2017, 12:26 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 01-31-2017, 06:34 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-31-2017, 12:22 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-01-2017, 11:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-05-2017, 06:21 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-02-2017, 12:24 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-02-2017, 03:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-02-2017, 04:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-02-2017, 04:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-02-2017, 04:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-02-2017, 04:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-02-2017, 05:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-02-2017, 06:51 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-04-2017, 06:00 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 02-05-2017, 01:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-04-2017, 06:04 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 02-05-2017, 02:22 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-05-2017, 01:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 02-05-2017, 02:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-07-2017, 02:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-07-2017, 05:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-07-2017, 02:32 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-07-2017, 02:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-07-2017, 09:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-07-2017, 12:29 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-09-2017, 11:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-08-2017, 05:15 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-09-2017, 05:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-09-2017, 08:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-09-2017, 08:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-09-2017, 09:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-09-2017, 09:51 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-09-2017, 10:02 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-11-2017, 04:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-10-2017, 12:32 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-11-2017, 07:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-10-2017, 12:42 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-10-2017, 08:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-11-2017, 08:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-10-2017, 10:16 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-11-2017, 08:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-11-2017, 10:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-11-2017, 10:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-11-2017, 11:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-12-2017, 06:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-14-2017, 06:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-14-2017, 09:00 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-14-2017, 09:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-28-2017, 07:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-14-2017, 08:21 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-15-2017, 12:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-15-2017, 06:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 02-19-2017, 05:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-19-2017, 09:01 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 02-19-2017, 12:53 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-19-2017, 06:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-19-2017, 08:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 02-19-2017, 11:46 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by ai_vin - 02-19-2017, 03:00 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-19-2017, 07:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-19-2017, 08:21 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-19-2017, 08:21 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-20-2017, 02:15 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-20-2017, 09:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-20-2017, 02:22 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-20-2017, 10:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-20-2017, 02:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-20-2017, 10:22 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-20-2017, 02:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Bear - 02-20-2017, 05:04 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-20-2017, 08:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-22-2017, 08:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-22-2017, 10:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 02-28-2017, 07:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-28-2017, 08:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-28-2017, 08:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-28-2017, 08:26 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-28-2017, 08:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 02-28-2017, 01:02 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-01-2017, 10:24 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-01-2017, 11:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-03-2017, 12:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 03-03-2017, 01:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-03-2017, 09:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-04-2017, 10:40 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-05-2017, 06:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-04-2017, 10:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-04-2017, 12:16 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-05-2017, 11:06 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-06-2017, 01:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-06-2017, 03:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-06-2017, 03:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-06-2017, 04:39 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-13-2017, 08:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-13-2017, 10:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-13-2017, 07:13 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-14-2017, 01:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-14-2017, 05:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-14-2017, 09:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-14-2017, 11:33 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-14-2017, 10:48 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-14-2017, 10:55 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-15-2017, 07:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-15-2017, 10:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-15-2017, 07:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-15-2017, 10:47 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-15-2017, 07:40 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-15-2017, 11:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-15-2017, 07:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-15-2017, 11:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-15-2017, 07:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-15-2017, 08:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-15-2017, 11:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-15-2017, 01:41 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-15-2017, 08:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-15-2017, 11:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-15-2017, 01:56 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-15-2017, 09:48 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 03-15-2017, 10:31 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-19-2017, 09:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-19-2017, 12:31 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-19-2017, 02:12 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-19-2017, 10:18 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017, 04:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-20-2017, 08:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017, 03:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-20-2017, 12:31 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017, 03:43 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-20-2017, 12:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017, 03:45 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-20-2017, 12:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017, 03:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-20-2017, 01:34 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-20-2017, 04:00 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-21-2017, 08:21 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-21-2017, 08:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-21-2017, 08:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-21-2017, 08:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-21-2017, 08:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-22-2017, 02:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-22-2017, 06:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-22-2017, 07:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-22-2017, 07:09 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 03-22-2017, 07:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-22-2017, 07:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-22-2017, 12:03 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-22-2017, 07:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-22-2017, 07:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-22-2017, 07:26 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-22-2017, 07:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-22-2017, 01:17 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-22-2017, 02:03 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-22-2017, 04:28 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-23-2017, 07:32 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-26-2017, 02:29 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-23-2017, 07:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-26-2017, 03:25 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-23-2017, 11:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-23-2017, 11:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by radtech497 - 03-23-2017, 12:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-23-2017, 06:13 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-24-2017, 12:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-26-2017, 02:19 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-24-2017, 11:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-24-2017, 11:28 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-25-2017, 12:26 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-24-2017, 08:18 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-24-2017, 09:22 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-27-2017, 02:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-24-2017, 09:48 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-25-2017, 02:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-26-2017, 05:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-26-2017, 02:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-26-2017, 11:11 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-27-2017, 02:21 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-27-2017, 12:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-27-2017, 02:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-27-2017, 01:00 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-27-2017, 02:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-27-2017, 02:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-27-2017, 02:24 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-27-2017, 02:39 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-27-2017, 02:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-27-2017, 02:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-27-2017, 03:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-27-2017, 02:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 03-27-2017, 02:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-27-2017, 08:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-27-2017, 08:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-27-2017, 08:39 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-27-2017, 11:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-28-2017, 12:21 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 03-28-2017, 12:11 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-28-2017, 12:26 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-28-2017, 06:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-29-2017, 01:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-29-2017, 02:24 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 03-29-2017, 12:05 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-30-2017, 05:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 04-17-2017, 10:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-30-2017, 05:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 04-17-2017, 10:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-11-2017, 06:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 04-17-2017, 10:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-13-2017, 07:00 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-13-2017, 07:06 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-13-2017, 07:24 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 04-16-2017, 01:26 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 04-17-2017, 12:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 04-19-2017, 12:47 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-30-2017, 10:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 04-19-2017, 01:14 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 04-28-2017, 09:48 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-29-2017, 05:32 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by radtech497 - 04-29-2017, 10:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-29-2017, 10:41 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-29-2017, 11:01 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 04-29-2017, 09:52 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-29-2017, 11:08 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-29-2017, 11:18 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-29-2017, 11:23 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-29-2017, 11:26 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-29-2017, 11:48 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-30-2017, 12:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-01-2017, 02:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 04-30-2017, 09:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 05-01-2017, 02:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Matterplay1 - 05-08-2017, 12:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-05-2017, 07:43 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-05-2017, 09:55 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-06-2017, 06:57 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-08-2017, 08:47 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-17-2017, 02:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 05-18-2017, 10:06 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-21-2017, 04:39 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-21-2017, 06:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 05-23-2017, 08:40 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-24-2017, 06:01 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 05-23-2017, 09:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-24-2017, 06:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 05-24-2017, 05:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by tmazanec1 - 05-30-2017, 03:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-08-2017, 12:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-08-2017, 06:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-09-2017, 06:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-10-2017, 05:13 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-10-2017, 08:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-15-2017, 06:26 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-16-2017, 07:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-16-2017, 06:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-16-2017, 08:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-16-2017, 08:04 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rhea47 - 06-19-2017, 11:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by radtech497 - 06-19-2017, 02:23 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-22-2017, 10:18 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-24-2017, 04:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-24-2017, 07:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-25-2017, 09:36 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-04-2017, 04:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-04-2017, 09:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-28-2017, 09:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-06-2017, 03:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-01-2017, 10:17 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-06-2017, 09:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-02-2017, 07:42 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-06-2017, 09:05 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-02-2017, 09:58 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-19-2017, 04:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-03-2017, 12:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-03-2017, 02:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-05-2017, 03:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-19-2017, 06:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-19-2017, 08:29 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 07-18-2017, 07:46 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-19-2017, 03:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 07-19-2017, 07:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-18-2017, 07:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-19-2017, 06:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-19-2017, 06:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-19-2017, 08:00 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 07-22-2017, 01:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-22-2017, 06:29 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 07-23-2017, 02:09 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-24-2017, 12:33 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 07-24-2017, 07:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 07-24-2017, 08:26 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 07-25-2017, 11:37 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-26-2017, 12:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 07-26-2017, 02:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-26-2017, 03:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 07-26-2017, 11:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-26-2017, 11:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 07-26-2017, 11:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 07-26-2017, 12:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-27-2017, 12:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 07-27-2017, 07:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-27-2017, 08:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-28-2017, 11:02 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-09-2017, 12:40 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-09-2017, 04:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-10-2017, 09:56 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 08-11-2017, 07:55 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-11-2017, 01:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-12-2017, 01:14 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 08-16-2017, 06:59 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 08-17-2017, 04:31 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 08-17-2017, 05:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 08-29-2017, 06:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 09-10-2017, 04:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-17-2017, 05:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 09-17-2017, 01:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 09-17-2017, 05:12 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-17-2017, 05:21 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 09-17-2017, 06:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by QwertyYerty - 09-17-2017, 12:39 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by terrafamilia - 09-18-2017, 08:56 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 09-21-2017, 02:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 10-09-2017, 02:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-09-2017, 06:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 10-09-2017, 08:52 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Vaktus - 10-09-2017, 09:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-30-2017, 06:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 10-09-2017, 07:21 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-30-2017, 06:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 10-26-2017, 03:18 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-30-2017, 06:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 10-29-2017, 08:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-30-2017, 06:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-30-2017, 05:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by MyTrueNameIs - 11-01-2017, 06:38 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 11-24-2017, 12:56 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 11-08-2017, 07:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 11-25-2017, 10:01 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 11-17-2017, 01:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by MyTrueNameIs - 11-17-2017, 05:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by MyTrueNameIs - 11-17-2017, 06:01 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by MyTrueNameIs - 11-17-2017, 06:06 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 11-25-2017, 11:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-24-2017, 05:18 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 12-05-2017, 09:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-24-2017, 06:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 12-08-2017, 08:46 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-24-2017, 06:57 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 12-24-2017, 04:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-24-2017, 06:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 12-24-2017, 10:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-25-2017, 06:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 12-29-2017, 03:15 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by tmazanec1 - 02-12-2018, 09:32 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-20-2018, 12:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 02-20-2018, 08:17 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 02-20-2018, 11:02 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 02-22-2018, 04:27 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-29-2018, 09:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Vaktus - 02-28-2018, 06:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-29-2018, 09:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 03-21-2018, 10:48 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-28-2018, 09:02 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-29-2018, 09:49 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-01-2018, 01:32 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-01-2018, 08:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-05-2018, 09:41 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-05-2018, 11:07 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-06-2018, 02:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-06-2018, 03:00 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-09-2018, 04:11 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-09-2018, 05:22 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-09-2018, 09:40 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 06-14-2018, 06:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Rynn - 06-14-2018, 06:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Crossroads - 06-15-2018, 01:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-10-2018, 11:24 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-10-2018, 11:37 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-11-2018, 12:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-11-2018, 04:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-16-2018, 03:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-16-2018, 11:49 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-13-2018, 08:05 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-13-2018, 04:59 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-13-2018, 11:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-16-2018, 12:45 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-20-2018, 09:54 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-21-2018, 05:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 06-20-2018, 10:05 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-28-2018, 07:29 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-02-2018, 10:22 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 07-03-2018, 01:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 07-09-2018, 07:27 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Cray - 11-10-2018, 03:19 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by sandcastles - 06-19-2019, 12:50 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-19-2019, 08:24 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Avengium - 10-06-2019, 02:58 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Cray - 10-08-2019, 09:10 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 10-09-2019, 08:17 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 01-09-2021, 02:35 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 01-09-2021, 02:47 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-11-2021, 08:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-09-2021, 08:48 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by sandcastles - 01-10-2021, 01:13 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 01-11-2021, 08:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by sandcastles - 01-29-2021, 11:50 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 01-29-2021, 12:15 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 03-25-2021, 05:41 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 03-25-2021, 07:57 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-28-2021, 09:01 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-29-2021, 12:37 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 04-29-2021, 12:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-29-2021, 01:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Astronomer - 04-30-2021, 01:14 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 04-30-2021, 02:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-03-2021, 11:11 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-04-2021, 12:08 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-05-2021, 09:18 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-05-2021, 09:43 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Dfleymmes1134 - 05-06-2021, 02:55 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 05-06-2021, 10:38 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-08-2021, 05:01 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-08-2021, 06:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-08-2021, 04:45 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-09-2021, 07:23 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Everything4404 - 05-10-2021, 02:42 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-10-2021, 03:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-10-2021, 07:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-21-2021, 11:05 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-22-2021, 05:10 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Dfleymmes1134 - 06-07-2021, 12:36 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 05-22-2021, 05:20 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 05-22-2021, 05:30 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by NexusEye - 06-06-2021, 01:33 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-07-2021, 12:04 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by NexusEye - 06-06-2021, 04:58 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-07-2021, 12:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-07-2021, 12:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-07-2021, 01:00 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Dfleymmes1134 - 06-07-2021, 01:01 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-07-2021, 01:44 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Dfleymmes1134 - 06-07-2021, 01:51 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by NexusEye - 06-07-2021, 06:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-07-2021, 10:51 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by NexusEye - 06-09-2021, 02:11 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-10-2021, 12:03 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-11-2021, 11:01 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by stevebowers - 06-12-2021, 06:46 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-15-2021, 11:51 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Dfleymmes1134 - 06-16-2021, 07:27 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-16-2021, 07:53 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-17-2021, 06:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-21-2021, 11:03 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-22-2021, 04:41 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 06-22-2021, 06:29 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 06-22-2021, 07:16 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Dfleymmes1134 - 07-13-2021, 10:58 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Dfleymmes1134 - 10-23-2021, 01:06 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Drashner1 - 10-24-2021, 12:54 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Architect - 07-12-2021, 05:38 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Architect - 07-12-2021, 05:40 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Dfleymmes1134 - 07-14-2021, 12:43 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Architect - 07-14-2021, 01:22 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Architect - 07-12-2021, 05:50 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Architect - 07-12-2021, 06:08 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Architect - 07-12-2021, 09:25 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Architect - 07-12-2021, 10:51 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Architect - 07-12-2021, 11:12 PM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by The Astronomer - 07-14-2021, 01:07 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by Dfleymmes1134 - 07-14-2021, 01:25 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-07-2021, 02:38 AM
RE: Proof-reading EG - by selden - 09-07-2021, 02:45 AM

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