08-15-2016, 07:51 AM
(08-14-2016, 10:05 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-f...Criticisms
"If you can'y find anything dramatic to write"
should be
"If you can't find anything dramatic to write"
Thanks! Fixed that, & patched up the last paragraph a bit too, since I thought the meaning of the older version was not quite clear.
Stephen