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Time and Scale
a historical event more significant to them then the birth or deeds of any person
should be
a historical event more significant to them than the birth or deeds of any person
(then -> than)
Terragen expansion wave had filled the thickness of the galactic disk.
should be
Terragen expansion wave had filled the thickness of the galactic "thin disk."
Time and Scale
a historical event more significant to them then the birth or deeds of any person
should be
a historical event more significant to them than the birth or deeds of any person
(then -> than)
Terragen expansion wave had filled the thickness of the galactic disk.
should be
Terragen expansion wave had filled the thickness of the galactic "thin disk."
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