08-17-2016, 05:36 AM
(08-17-2016, 01:36 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/page/293I've removed most of the present tense except where it applies to the Current Era.
The Future isn't here yet
Terragens have encountered other…things.
should be
Terragens have encountered other things.
It seems to me that there's an inappropriate use of present tense in many paragraphs. This is one of my pet peeves. When writing about things that happened in the past, the writer should use past tense. Certainly the two tenses shouldn't be used alternately when writing about the same events. Unfortunately, fixing this would require a careful rewrite of most of the page.
Thanks!