08-17-2016, 05:49 AM
(08-17-2016, 01:59 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/page/295Fixed; thanks.
Time and Scale
a historical event more significant to them then the birth or deeds of any person
should be
a historical event more significant to them than the birth or deeds of any person
(then -> than)
Terragen expansion wave had filled the thickness of the galactic disk.
should be
Terragen expansion wave had filled the thickness of the galactic "thin disk."