08-26-2016, 07:27 AM
http://orionsarm.com/eg-article/46478dd0d988f
Dedicated Hyperturing
be used to attack other a transapient directly
should be
be used to attack another transapient directly
is a distraction for the task at hand
should be
is a distraction from the task at hand
These freed d.h's generally
should be
These freed DH generally
freelance d.h. are in high demand.
should be
freelance DH are in high demand.
(the latter two primarily for consistency with the abbreviation used elsewhere in the article.)
Dedicated Hyperturing
be used to attack other a transapient directly
should be
be used to attack another transapient directly
is a distraction for the task at hand
should be
is a distraction from the task at hand
These freed d.h's generally
should be
These freed DH generally
freelance d.h. are in high demand.
should be
freelance DH are in high demand.
(the latter two primarily for consistency with the abbreviation used elsewhere in the article.)
Selden