08-26-2016, 08:57 AM
http://orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2ad0f11181
9999 AT to Present: (Current Era)
10402 - The Solar Dominion Pocketstar Are We Having Fun Yet? 9902) attempt to investigate the Metric Ghostsfailed;
should be
10402 - The Solar Dominion Pocketstar Are We Having Fun Yet?'s attempt to investigate the Metric Ghosts failed;
but might be better as
10402 - The attempt by the Solar Dominion Pocketstar Are We Having Fun Yet? to investigate the Metric Ghosts failed;
(also note a space needs to be inserted between Ghosts and failed.)
The AIs have to replied to queries about the information encoded
should be
The AIs have not replied to queries about the information encoded
(I'm not sure that "AIs" is appropriate here. Maybe "Archailects" was meant?)
9999 AT to Present: (Current Era)
10402 - The Solar Dominion Pocketstar Are We Having Fun Yet? 9902) attempt to investigate the Metric Ghostsfailed;
should be
10402 - The Solar Dominion Pocketstar Are We Having Fun Yet?'s attempt to investigate the Metric Ghosts failed;
but might be better as
10402 - The attempt by the Solar Dominion Pocketstar Are We Having Fun Yet? to investigate the Metric Ghosts failed;
(also note a space needs to be inserted between Ghosts and failed.)
The AIs have to replied to queries about the information encoded
should be
The AIs have not replied to queries about the information encoded
(I'm not sure that "AIs" is appropriate here. Maybe "Archailects" was meant?)
Selden