08-29-2016, 12:31 AM
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4847348d6e46c
Known Net, The
icon may actually a spy program
should be
icon may actually be a spy program
That is why the Known Net was diminished by the Version War and other catastrophes and alarms that have shaken the Nexus, even if it was slowed for a while.
might be better as
That is why the Known Net has been only temporarily diminished by the Version War and other catastrophes and alarms that have shaken the Nexus. They have slowed the Net only for a while.
Known Net, The
icon may actually a spy program
should be
icon may actually be a spy program
That is why the Known Net was diminished by the Version War and other catastrophes and alarms that have shaken the Nexus, even if it was slowed for a while.
might be better as
That is why the Known Net has been only temporarily diminished by the Version War and other catastrophes and alarms that have shaken the Nexus. They have slowed the Net only for a while.
Selden