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Proof-reading EG
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/45e788b49c77e
Alexandria II Bibliotech project

hierarchy of semi-turning AIs
should be
hierarchy of semi-turing AIs

the various semi-turning daemon clades
should be
the various semi-turing daemon clades
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47b25d5935857
Memory Moon

over one hundred Moons (113)are in use
should be
over one hundred Moons (113) are in use
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce493e2bea5
Technorapture Hypernation

Frequent (mis)use of the acronym THRN instead of TRHN

They were strongly influence by the old transhumanist
should be
They were strongly influenced by the old transhumanist
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cd35531fb53
Negentropy Alliance

The article contains seemingly contradictory dates for its founding: 2465 AT and 2738 AT.

In the header, it says
Founded 2465 a.t.

but later in the body it says
quote:
Originally, the Alliance consisted only of five superficially very different worlds: Negentropy Prime, Ken Ferjik, Greylag, Daffy and Gegton. In 2738 a.t., following their linkage through wormholes, they established an alliance based on the distributed archailect network of the AI cluster that was to become the Just One.
Selden
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The last-mentioned discrepancy need not be a real one; the Negentropy Alliance could have started on separate worlds, but only became a unified empire once wormholes were in place.
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http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-m...t&menu=art
Art Galleries
has multiple inconsistencies in link titles.


a link titled Worlds to
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-g...gallery=37
but the page itself is titled Gallery: Worlds
none of the other Gallery pages have the prefix "Gallery:"

except that
Many of the links have an ampersand in them, but the linked pages spell out AND

One of the links spells out AND:
VECS AND ROBOTS
but it links to
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-g...gallery=44
which is titled
Gallery, Robots and Vecs

has a link titled Spacecraft to
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-g...gallery=40
but the page itself is titled Ships

Logos & Motifs
links to
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-g...gallery=46
which is titled just Logos
Selden
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(09-06-2016, 09:04 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-m...t&menu=art
Art Galleries
has multiple inconsistencies in link titles.


a link titled Worlds to
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-g...gallery=37
but the page itself is titled Gallery: Worlds
none of the other Gallery pages have the prefix "Gallery:"

except that
Many of the links have an ampersand in them, but the linked pages spell out AND

One of the links spells out AND:
VECS AND ROBOTS
but it links to
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-g...gallery=44
which is titled
Gallery, Robots and Vecs

has a link titled Spacecraft to
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-g...gallery=40
but the page itself is titled Ships

Logos & Motifs
links to
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-g...gallery=46
which is titled just Logos

I believe I've resolved these inconsistencies.
Stephen
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(09-04-2016, 10:42 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce493e2bea5
Technorapture Hypernation

Frequent (mis)use of the acronym THRN instead of TRHN

They were strongly influence by the old transhumanist
should be
They were strongly influenced by the old transhumanist

FixedSmile
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(09-04-2016, 09:46 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47b25d5935857
Memory Moon

over one hundred Moons (113)are in use
should be
over one hundred Moons (113) are in use

Fixed.
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(09-04-2016, 10:42 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce493e2bea5
Technorapture Hypernation

Frequent (mis)use of the acronym THRN instead of TRHN

They were strongly influence by the old transhumanist
should be
They were strongly influenced by the old transhumanist

Fixed these and also several other instances of 'THRN' in other EG articles. Evidently an easy mistake to make...
Stephen
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