09-28-2016, 08:50 PM
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Transaturation Ascension
Tipler Oracle due to it's massive size
should be
Tipler Oracle due to its massive size
as well as due to it's purpose
should be
as well as due to its purpose
might prefer a mobile and more flexible form, maybe, because
might be better as
might prefer a mobile and more flexible form, perhaps because
There's an inconsistent use of single and double quotes. Most are double, so ...
and 'general purpose' basement
should be
and "general purpose" basement
an 'accelerator card'
should be
an "accelerator card"
Transaturation Ascension
Tipler Oracle due to it's massive size
should be
Tipler Oracle due to its massive size
as well as due to it's purpose
should be
as well as due to its purpose
might prefer a mobile and more flexible form, maybe, because
might be better as
might prefer a mobile and more flexible form, perhaps because
There's an inconsistent use of single and double quotes. Most are double, so ...
and 'general purpose' basement
should be
and "general purpose" basement
an 'accelerator card'
should be
an "accelerator card"
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