02-11-2017, 08:42 AM
(02-10-2017, 10:16 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48645c02a68f1Fixed; I've rewritten the Body Armour article slightly to make it more comprehensive.
Marrowbone Armor
since it's creation.
should be
since its creation.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4610062377d94
Body Armour
became more intelligent their developed the combat mecha.
might be better as
became more intelligent they developed into combat mecha.