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Maybe we could consolidate the article named Pseudoclarketech inside the article Clarketech. Maybe a section with title of section named Pseudoclarketech.

The entire article as seen in Clarker:

Pseudoclarketech - Text by M. Alan Kazlev
Technology that in all ways pretends to be, or appears to be, clarketech, but, although advanced, still shows itself to be amenable to study and reverse engineering
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what more advanced beings or civilizations has discovered.
should be
what more advanced beings or civilizations have discovered.
Selden
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(03-19-2017, 12:31 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46707bdd163c1
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what more advanced beings or civilizations has discovered.
should be
what more advanced beings or civilizations have discovered.

Fixed. Thanks!
Stephen
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creating a new colony sin an unknown location
should be
creating a new colony in an unknown location
Selden
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(03-19-2017, 10:18 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/5420120a0bfde
Merged Entity, The

creating a new colony sin an unknown location
should be
creating a new colony in an unknown location

Fixed. Thanks!
Stephen
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@matterplay , what do you think of merging pseudoclarktech into clarktech?
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Broken link- Siberoos

In the decades following the formation of the Free States, Antarctican culture blossomed. The prevailing ideology of the continent became the exploration of the novel, rejecting much of the national and corporate culture pervading Old Earth at the time. Few of the Free States retained strong cultural ties to their founding nations and corps. Easy immigration both to and between the States encouraged a cosmopolitan living, this continental melting pot attracted many disaffected groups from across the globe such as the early vec clades and the Siberoos

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4c1db78cddd50
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Broken link- Chilean

The mid-22nd century saw the rise of Antarctic literature (also known as "Antarcticana"); some of the best known examples of early Antarcticana include epics such as Sun Lingyu's "Cold Desert" (2164) and Adil Khan's "United" (2167). Although popular amongst those living on the continent, Antarctic literature was not well-received by foreign critics, who dismissed as "comically arrogant", claiming that it "painted all outsiders as bitter racists", while presenting a highly romanticized Antarctica where people of all ethnicities come to live in peace (which was not necessarily true). This idealized version of Antarctica was also featured in much of the native music, and in 2169, an unofficial "Antarctic Anthem" was selected by the inhabitants of the First Chilaen colony ("Untarnished Land"), and an unofficial flag was selected just a few months later.

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Interplanetary age link goes to old Sundering article instead.

In standard designs, automatic nanotech systems maintain a bubblehab and scavenge the atmosphere for building and maintenance materials. The hab itself is an artificial organism; it has at least the kind of vegetative awareness of a plant or a plantbot, but even the earlier models could be sentient or sapient, and some are even transapient. The first Interplanetary Age bubblehabs were manufactured by sophonts and their bots, but by the dawn of the Nanotech Age designs arose that were neumann-capable, and could grow and reproduce the way most modern bubblehabs do.

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4f181b2caeccf

The current page it goes to.

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/567786026095b
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Broken link- S4 Archailects

Nieuw Amsterdam - 20,000,000,000 
Staten - 1,000,000,000
Several hundred million elsewhere
40+ S4 archailects


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