Proof-reading EG

[ProxCenBound]

4 issues in a one paragraph article:
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/45f995454be75

I rewrote this article slightly, since we already have a neuter gender in the article about sexual genders. I have defined an 'asexual' as someone who is both genderless and without sexual desire; it seems entirely possible that some neuts have entirely satisfactory, if somewhat cerebral, sex lives.

I like the rewrite. Reads better without the phrase "the whole sex thing."  

EDIT: Also, both of the ontology related articles just linked to, under Related Articles, under Ontological Conservatives, state: "Text by M. Alan Kazlev from from Anders Sandberg's Transhuman terminology"