Proof-reading EG

[Avengium]

Steve. I and Todd talked about the Symbol of Communion of worlds in the thread Possible updating or creation of Empire emblems
he said:

I kind of like the sense of 'arising out of the sophont' that the original symbol provides.

And i am agree the classic symbol is more unique than the new symbol i made. So talk with Todd to see if he agrees with changing. Maybe you could leave the classic as the main symbol, and subtitute the old 3d rose, for the new 3d rose, keeping the The Rose of Souls as the main symbol.

[QwertyYerty]

87 - First commercial fusion reactor (a D-T inertial confinement design) comes online in France, supplying 300MW of power to the European grid. 

Shouldn't MW (megawatts) be megawatt hours?  Or am I just confused?

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2afc424975

EDIT:  I believe I was confused. 300 MW= 2,629,733 kW·h/yr. Which is much  less than 1% of the EU's 2013 power consumption.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_co...onsumption

[stevebowers]

300 MW= 2,629,733 kW·h/yr. Which is much less than 1% of the EU's 2013 power consumption.

Yeah, this is an insignificant amount. By 87 AT, European power consumption will presumably be a lot higher, so fusion will be an even smaller contribution to the whole. This is why fusion remains insignificant for several decades after the first successful reactor. Hopefully this allows the renewables sector to become even more competitive at the same time.

[QwertyYerty]

190 - Corporate owned space station and moon bases under construction become tax haven for business. Family business Lee Interorbital has a fleet of LEO shuttles.

Should be

190 - Corporate owned space stations and moon bases under construction become tax havens for business. Family business Lee Interorbital has a fleet of LEO shuttles.


http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2b10d8b211

[Drashner1]

190 - Corporate owned space station and moon bases under construction become tax haven for business. Family business Lee Interorbital has a fleet of LEO shuttles.

Should be

190 - Corporate owned space stations and moon bases under construction become tax havens for business. Family business Lee Interorbital has a fleet of LEO shuttles.


http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2b10d8b211

Fixed.

Thanks!

Todd

[QwertyYerty]

198 - Jean Beloit Sampson a third generation orbital tweak baby and one of the original Homo sapiens superior "vunderkinder", organises epic corporate coup and gains leadership of major orbital megacorp Solar Systems Development Corporation (SSDC) on Atlantis Habitat.

Should be


198 - Jean Beloit Sampson a third generation orbital tweak baby and one of the original Homo sapiens superior "vunderkinder", organizes an epic corporate coup and gains leadership of major orbital megacorp Solar Systems Development Corporation (SSDC) on Atlantis Habitat.

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2b10d8b211

[QwertyYerty]

The following entries need periods, in additon to the bolded change noted below:

199 - First genetically engineered Space Adapted Humans are born 

202-210 - Heteromorphing and extreme body modifications are the latest fad among the educated and fashion-conscious classes 

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2b10d8b211

[QwertyYerty]

Updated by QuertyYerty 

Should be

Updated by QwertyYerty

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48e2e21ee6d7f

[stevebowers]

Updated by QuertyYerty 

Should be

Updated by QwertyYerty

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48e2e21ee6d7f

Fixed. Don't forget to send in a biography (and that applies to anyone else without one at the moment)

[QwertyYerty]

Where do we post the biography?