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Proof-reading EG
"Distinct very" should be "very distinct".

A scouting party sent down to the surface discovered an abundance of anaerobic bacteria belonging to several distinct very phyla and a dna-analogue genetic structure, but metabolically not unlike the thermophiles and methanogens of Earth.
QwertyYerty
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(09-17-2017, 01:56 AM)QwertyYerty Wrote: "Distinct very" should be "very distinct".

A scouting party sent down to the surface discovered an abundance of anaerobic bacteria belonging to several distinct very phyla and a dna-analogue genetic structure, but metabolically not unlike the thermophiles and methanogens of Earth.

Which article is this for?

Thanks!

Todd
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This is the Penglai article we are currently editing. Fixed.
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(09-10-2017, 04:44 AM)QwertyYerty Wrote: Date is wrong in the EG and/ or timeline.

The first unmanned mission to Tau Ceti was the launch of a mass-beam-propelled, unmanned probe, named the Giordano Bruno, launched in 265 a.t.

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/48e2e21ee6d7f


195 - The laser-propelled, unmanned robot probe, the Giordano Bruno, is launched towards Tau Ceti.

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b2b10d8b211
I don't mind which of these two dates we choose. Probably the later date is better. Any preferences?
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As long as using the later date doesn't mess up anything with the Tau Ceti article (being rewritten, so likely not) or the timelines (probably not), then probably fine to use that.

Todd
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(09-17-2017, 06:37 AM)Drashner1 Wrote: As long as using the later date doesn't mess up anything with the Tau Ceti article (being rewritten, so likely not) or the timelines (probably not), then probably fine to use that.

Todd

I agree, using the later date is good idea.
QwertyYerty
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The page on Modubots has a link on "MITE array" that only takes you to a page on mites (the critters). I think it was meant to got to the page for MOTEs (MITE is defined within that page).

Ciao,

Terrafamilia
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Both fixed.
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Any thoughts on the suggestion from this post?

http://www.orionsarm.com/forum/showthrea...9#pid35039
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(10-09-2017, 02:03 AM)Crossroads Wrote: Any thoughts on the suggestion from this post?

http://www.orionsarm.com/forum/showthrea...9#pid35039

Your suggested replacement text has now been incorporated with one minor change (addition of the word 'an' to a sentence).

Thanks!

ToddSmile
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