Proof-reading EG

[Drashner1]

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Toposophic Level and Brain Size

Some possessives are missing their apostrophes:

¶ What is the entity's origin?

capabilities of the sophonts processing substrate
should be
capabilities of the sophont's processing substrate

depending on the sophonts S-level.
should be
depending on the sophont's S-level.

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Matrioshka Hypernode

worrisome possibilities, include that the
should be
worrisome possibilities, including that the

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Slow Gods and Fast Gods

Some gods are slow to conserve energy;
is ambiguous
( For some reason I first read it as meaning something like
Some gods are slow to adopt the idea that they should conserve energy; )

It might be better as
Some gods run slowly in order to conserve energy;

All fixed