11-01-2017, 06:38 PM
The article "Computronium Bell-curve Theory" ends with "or the appetite of black holes with certain appetite." using the word "appetite" twice is a little repetitive and slightly confusing I recommend changing it to " or the appetite of black holes with a certain hunger."
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/484f2c25bfcbe
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/484f2c25bfcbe