11-17-2017, 05:57 PM
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/57ea4e98ab833
Minor recommended edit for FreeBirds article. Vacuum adaptations are mentioned twice, a single sentence for freebirds and a the entire last paragraph for "Other subsophont zero-G avian clades" which seems out of place on an article about freebirds. I would change the last paragraph to be about the few freebird clades that were adapted to vacuum.
Minor recommended edit for FreeBirds article. Vacuum adaptations are mentioned twice, a single sentence for freebirds and a the entire last paragraph for "Other subsophont zero-G avian clades" which seems out of place on an article about freebirds. I would change the last paragraph to be about the few freebird clades that were adapted to vacuum.