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Singularity Levels
the second singularity, which stands in the same relation to SI:1 and SI:1 does to ordinary sapient
should be
the second singularity, which stands in the same relation to SI:1 as SI:1 does to ordinary sapient
(and -> as)
SI:4 - The Lesser Archai incomprehensible to subsingularity and even lower transapient sentients.
would be better as
SI:4 - The Lesser Archai incomprehensible to subsingularity and even to lower transapient sentients.
(I stumbled mentally, thinking "Wait, what? Transapients lower than subsingularity???")
Singularity Levels
the second singularity, which stands in the same relation to SI:1 and SI:1 does to ordinary sapient
should be
the second singularity, which stands in the same relation to SI:1 as SI:1 does to ordinary sapient
(and -> as)
SI:4 - The Lesser Archai incomprehensible to subsingularity and even lower transapient sentients.
would be better as
SI:4 - The Lesser Archai incomprehensible to subsingularity and even to lower transapient sentients.
(I stumbled mentally, thinking "Wait, what? Transapients lower than subsingularity???")
Selden