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Proof-reading EG
I should have provided a link-
neuron star is correct.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/462d995c13c9e

...actually, now I come to think of it; if we use the Content Management System, links doen't work very well in the captions of images, so I'd better leave it as it is.
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Maybe include neutron in parentheses to clarify it? (I now seem to recall making this same mistake in the past.)

The article on neuron stars does say that they actually are based on neutron stars.
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/476ecbbab3126
Relay001

from ones starting point
should be
from one's starting point

gates to ones destination
should be
gates to one's destination
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-s...rs_keepers

has lots of apostrophes missing in possessives.
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4f839903c195d
Enhancer

Typically, the heroes discovers the device
should be
Typically, the heroes discover the device

Suggestion: change
In the case of genuine enhancer devices, these do exist, but are rare,
to
Genuine enhancer devices do exist, but are rare,
Selden
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce493e2bea5
Technorapture Hypernation

In the datapanel appears the clade Animant, but
who or what is an animant?
Also, the TRHN Datapanel could benefit from adding more hyperlinks.
And linking things like Omegarapture , Known Space , Archai , etc
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Quote: "Nature considers all the variables".
Quote: "the object and the theory are distinct things"
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Animants are, I think, a very early version of what later became provolves or rianths,
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Then, it should be ammended on the article. Smile
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Quote: "Nature considers all the variables".
Quote: "the object and the theory are distinct things"
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All updates done, with exceptions noted below...

(06-13-2018, 08:05 AM)Avengium Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce493e2bea5
Technorapture Hypernation

In the datapanel appears the clade Animant, but
who or what is an animant?
Also, the TRHN Datapanel could benefit from adding more hyperlinks.
And linking things like Omegarapture , Known Space , Archai , etc

I folded the animants into the postprovolves/postsplices. We apparently do not have articles for Omegarapture and Known Space. I linked "archai".

(05-16-2018, 03:54 AM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-s...rs_keepers

has lots of apostrophes missing in possessives.

I was not able to find where I can edit pages, or else I do not have access. Someone else will have to fix those.

(04-09-2018, 09:40 PM)selden Wrote: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/485acf5ed292b
Sentient Rights Protocols

needs to be updated with sentient -> sophont

as has already happened in the article
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/485acb81cdb0b
Universal Declaration of Sophont Rights

except for its link to the Sentient Rights article.

Before I do that, since it is a somewhat big change and has to do with canon, I would like confirmation from an admin. Are we supposed to change sentient to sophont in that article?
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(06-14-2018, 06:38 AM)Crossroads Wrote: Before I do that, since it is a somewhat big change and has to do with canon, I would like confirmation from an admin. Are we supposed to change sentient to sophont in that article?

For the bill yes but I'd leave the protocol unchanged, AIUI the protocol isn't just about sophonts but any sentient being (e.g. animals, pre-sophont bots etc). They're a more complex concept related to ontologies that define appropriate behaviours relative to the sentience of the entities in question. Rather than just a straight swap at the name if anyone thinks there should be a change it can be discussed in its own thread.
OA Wish list:
  1. DNI
  2. Internal medical system
  3. A dormbot, because domestic chores suck!
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