Proof-reading EG

[ProxCenBound]

Before I do that, since it is a somewhat big change and has to do with canon, I would like confirmation from an admin. Are we supposed to change sentient to sophont in that article?

For the bill yes but I'd leave the protocol unchanged, AIUI the protocol isn't just about sophonts but any sentient being (e.g. animals, pre-sophont bots etc). They're a more complex concept related to ontologies that define appropriate behaviours relative to the sentience of the entities in question. Rather than just a straight swap at the name if anyone thinks there should be a change it can be discussed in its own thread.

Thanks. I have updated Universal Bill of Sentient Rights to Universal Declaration of Sophont Rights within the text of the Sentient Rights Protocols article.

Now we just need someone to do the edits in post #884 and this thread will be up to date.

[Avengium]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/53a6dd46f2d18
Om, The

I suggest adding links to: Encyclopedia Galactica , Ken Ferjik , New Taylor . Both three articles exists.

[selden]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/5b291ca5d036f
FuMa

Either some information has been intentionally omitted, or the formatting of the data panel is damaged. I suspect the latter.
Using Firefox ESR V52.8.1 (64 bit) I see

   

[Avengium]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45f0c580310bf Amalgamation

The article need hyperlinks in the text. (Control + F to search) For example: 
transapientech , toposophic , ascent , Sephirotic / Diamond Network / Objectivist Commonwealth / Deeper Covenant , Perseus arm region , blight ,
Fifth level Archailect , Perseus Arm , M star , Geteche disaster , Solar Dominion ,
Sophic League , Amalgamation Containment Initiative , wormhole , Metasoft , Keter , amat , Black Angel, autowars , turingrade , superturingrade , clarketech , biont , hyperdenebola collapse , ascension , Ludd , Verifex catastrophe , kalyptics , solipsist , Panvirtuality , Sephirotic , xenosophont , Perseus Arm Defense Organisation , Inner Core , Princes (perseus princes) , Efficiency Maximization Paradigm , noosphere

[stevebowers]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/5b291ca5d036f
FuMa

Either some information has been intentionally omitted, or the formatting of the data panel is damaged. I suspect the latter.

Quite correct. A " becomes a 2 if you don't press shift.

Fixed.

[selden]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/5b33b818a0fd3
Cliotelescopy

An telescope array
should be
A telescope array

[Avengium]

In this article: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4ce5710003472 LinnEnt (Linnaeus Enterprises)
When you click on the first image, the image that appears is not the one is showing, but a different one http://www.orionsarm.com/im_store/engenerator.JPG
I think the image should be the same.

[stevebowers]

In this article: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4ce5710003472 LinnEnt (Linnaeus Enterprises)
When you click on the first image, the image that appears is not the one is showing, but a different one http://www.orionsarm.com/im_store/engenerator.JPG
I think the image should be the same.

That's weird. Such a thing shouldn't happen. Fixed.

[Avengium]

http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce3f35333da Red Star 'M'pire

i suggest adding links to:
Kja Observance, godwatchers.

[Cray]

I stumbled over this old article:
https://orionsarm.com/eg-article/47645a0d89936

I think the article's fine, but I'd suggest deleting the conclusion, "This is of course impossible to reach for an evolved bioid. "

Since 2001, OA has added a number of postbiont transapients that, by the definition of transapients, should be capable of AI-like complete introspection.