09-30-2016, 12:09 PM
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/57b4613e13a25
Big Ben's World
Inconsistent capitalizations:
Democratically elected Transapient council
should be
Democratically elected transapient council
6 billion UV adapted Tweaks ('Bennies')
2 Billion Vacuum adapted humans. [delete terminal period]
8 Billion vecs of various design [ design -> designs]
15 billion virtuals of various origin [ origin -> origins ]
13 billion nearbaseline humans of various clade [ clade -> clades ]
11 billion sophont alife.
Suggestion:
Billion --> billion
Tweeks -> tweeks
Vacuum -> vacuum
( not capitalized since none of them are "proper names")
of various design and construction.
probably should be
of various designs and construction.
Big Ben's World
Inconsistent capitalizations:
Democratically elected Transapient council
should be
Democratically elected transapient council
6 billion UV adapted Tweaks ('Bennies')
2 Billion Vacuum adapted humans. [delete terminal period]
8 Billion vecs of various design [ design -> designs]
15 billion virtuals of various origin [ origin -> origins ]
13 billion nearbaseline humans of various clade [ clade -> clades ]
11 billion sophont alife.
Suggestion:
Billion --> billion
Tweeks -> tweeks
Vacuum -> vacuum
( not capitalized since none of them are "proper names")
of various design and construction.
probably should be
of various designs and construction.
Selden