08-08-2016, 06:58 AM
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/491418776bb70 (Tunh Xenohole)
the sentence
" The Tunnlers (as the aliens came to be called) appeared to have once had a much more extensive network, but over time enough links had failed to disconnect the discovered links from the rest. "
might be better as
" The Tunnlers (as the aliens came to be called) appeared to have once had a much more extensive network, but over time links had failed, disconnecting the discovered links from the rest."
the sentence
" The Tunnlers (as the aliens came to be called) appeared to have once had a much more extensive network, but over time enough links had failed to disconnect the discovered links from the rest. "
might be better as
" The Tunnlers (as the aliens came to be called) appeared to have once had a much more extensive network, but over time links had failed, disconnecting the discovered links from the rest."
Selden