http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/49afd86e67383
Hamilton Institute of Exopaleontology, The
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An aristocracy has developed on Jannah, led by those scientists who have made major contributions to all fields of science.
The core of the HIE’s stability for the past seven thousand years since the end of the Interim has
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An aristocracy has developed on Jannah, led by those scientists who have made major contributions to all fields of science.
The core of the HIE’s stability for the past seven thousand years since the end of the Interim has
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Many expeditions involve relativistic journeys, because one is voyaging beyond the wormhole nexus. Occasionally one finds ruins on colonised planets, such as the mysterious obelisks on Robinson III, but more long-term expeditions by very dedicated scientists, more into fossils than families, and attracted also by the option of a relativistic journey to see the future are more common.
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Many expeditions involve relativistic journeys beyond the wormhole nexus. Occasionally one finds ruins on colonised planets, such as the mysterious obelisks on Robinson III, but many long-term expeditions are carried out by very dedicated scientists, more into fossils than families. Expeditions which attract people who consider a relativistic journey as a way to see the future are even more common.
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