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November updates  (prospective) - will edit this post further/make additional post

updated articles: 
hyperion 
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805c9b24e09

antechains
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47e86cf4927da

https://www.orionsarm.com/forum/showthre...9#pid70709

Charlwood

https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46242397497e7

Sakawa Sagawa corp
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/485daff014b2a

https://www.orionsarm.com/forum/showthre...3#pid70653

New articles
Perseus pirates

https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/6372193d0212d

the silent planetarium 
https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/63828fefc5f26

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any others?

Yeah I got permission and deleted all those back in the megacorp thread; I wouldn't list that in the update. It's covered by the Hyperion rewrite.

Ok In that case, we should probably list all those articles in the development notes of the Hyperion article -
“Merged x, y, z, articles together+ deleted duplicated information into the Hyperion article rewrite , November 2022”

“removed from the November updates list” Wrote:Crossroads says : Next step: I would like to delete and purge the following articles as redundant and contradictory to the rewritten article, as I mentioned in post #32 (for most) and #43 (for the moon of Saturn). Do I have official permission to do this?

Geteche - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/555b4b7ad5846
Hyperion (hyperturing) - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4675f4b4c3956
Hyperion (moon of Saturn) - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805d6de34c8
Hyperion (world) - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805d32904c8
Hyperion Faction - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805cf0470e1
Hyperion-Charlwood Alliance - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4680620f1d8b7
Hyperionites - visible at bottom of https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805cf0470e1
Marabi Patha, House - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46afd4d7b0078
Mathilde - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47e1bcea833f7

(11-27-2022, 12:23 PM)Worldtree Wrote: [ -> ]Ok In that case, we should probably list all those articles in the development notes of the Hyperion article -
“Merged x, y, z, articles together+ deleted duplicated information into the Hyperion article rewrite , November 2022”

“removed from the November updates list” Wrote:Crossroads says : Next step: I would like to delete and purge the following articles as redundant and contradictory to the rewritten article, as I mentioned in post #32 (for most) and #43 (for the moon of Saturn). Do I have official permission to do this?

Geteche - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/555b4b7ad5846
Hyperion (hyperturing) - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4675f4b4c3956
Hyperion (moon of Saturn) - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805d6de34c8
Hyperion (world) - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805d32904c8
Hyperion Faction - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805cf0470e1
Hyperion-Charlwood Alliance - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4680620f1d8b7
Hyperionites - visible at bottom of https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805cf0470e1
Marabi Patha, House - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46afd4d7b0078
Mathilde - https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47e1bcea833f7

Like this? https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46805c9b24e09

"Hyperion (moon of Saturn)" was deleted outright and was unrelated, but was discovered in the course of the updates. It was one scientifically-outdated sentence and a NASA picture with no Orion's Arm-unique material, with no mention in other articles.

That’s great, thanks!

Charlwood is still fairly short, but was updated and expanded as part of the Hyperion rewrite - might be worth including.

https://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/46242397497e7