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Maybe it'd read better if you were to explicitly include all of the possibilities.

My understanding is that all sizes of objects can be formed directly from the original gas cloud, and that sometimes the smaller objects are so small because they were prevented from becoming larger due to the winds from nearby proto-stellar objects blowing away the gasses and dust in their vicinity, causing them to be "starved" of material. Also, my impression is that bodies can form within planetary systems both by gravitational collapse and by accretion.  

It's all so complicated....
Selden
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(04-30-2017, 09:33 PM)Avengium Wrote: The Sophic League article needs links.
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45ce471d24974

I've added quite a few.
Stephen
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/590fd3608f6c9
Incremental Omega Point Hypothesis

converting their destination galaxy into computronium
should be
converting their destination galaxies into computronium
Selden
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Fixed - thanks!
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Metasoft http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cd30902bea3 should have more links to other articles. Smile
Also other major empires articles need links too.
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http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/53a6cc7e2c0f4
Galrecon

and would impact in thirsty-six standard days.
should be
and would impact in thirty six standard days.
Selden
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Ha!
Fixed. Thanks!
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We should add Jade Chime Singers http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/480278a1b5496
To Culture and Society under the section Xenosophonts?
http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45b177d3ef3b1
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The Caretakers Gods: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-topic/45cbca2e75287
Has a date that is incorrect. 4th August 2591 c.e. (622 a.t.) .
http://www.orionsarm.com/xcms.php?r=oa-c...-converter
The calendar converter shows: August 4, 2591 AD --> Archimedes 15, 623 AT .
Also, links can be added to the article of Caretaker Gods, and to Caretaker Seed: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4603283944951
And to Caretaker Protectorate: http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/460327eb69339
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The article Chesed (Archailect) http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/4625872300456 has a Typo.
"Orinally the benign transapient" should be "Originally the benign transapient".
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