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[Avengium]

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New Taylor

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Mutual Aggression Deterrence Accord was signed to form the Sophic League in 2314. Reformulationists , enlightenment.

Doubt: There were Mysterians in New Taylor and vicinities or not?

Suggestion: changing capital for "modosophont capital"

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Sacred Heart

Typo: business business.

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example:  Sophic League, New Taylor, mercurian type planet, Praesepe region, Taurus Nexus breakup, thriving city-planet with a full 16 wormholes, Version War, Wormhole Nexus, virtual warzones of gang warfare and the home of the black market, spaceports , orbital band ,

Suggestion: changing capital for "modosophont capital"

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Ararat

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: high toposophic , nearbaselines , Mysterians ( http://www.orionsarm.com/eg-article/47bb8b1eea5cf ) , Terragen , New Madray ,

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Orobon

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: white dwarf , Main Sequence stars, biont , near-baseline , Mysterian, Huxlyite sect,  Huxlyism, hedonism , 

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Mysterian

Needs more text. For example a backlink to Orobon article inside the text.

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Satyaloka

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Sophic League , starlifted , virtual universes and heavens , high toposophic node worlds , New Taylor , Sacred Heart ,
[see also The Three and the One, and The Transcension of Andapuyaran] .

Three and the One, The - [article]

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Sophic League , dyson shells , high toposophic ,

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Transcension of Andapuyaran

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Sophic League , orwood , avatar , eir [pronouns] , transcended into nirvana with yogic calm , remotes , subminds , high toposophic mind , habitat section , augments , godseeds , splice , nexus , small and sparsly equipped shuttle , wormhole terminus , wormhole ai , transcension , ISO , panvirt ai ,

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Anandayanna Nirvana

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Sophic League , Seven Anandayannas , Transcension of Andapuyaran .

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Anandayanna-Uvartarasha War

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Suborg , relativistic seed-node , Kupier mining expedition , eir clone-siblings , godtech , Oort Cloud , relativistic ship , subverted , hider clades , Version War , backups , orbitals , higher toposophic level , hyperturings , memetic , Avatar .

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Seven Anandayannas, The

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: First toposophic neogens , transcended Hyperturing , transapient , Clade , Computronium nodes.

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Ashram

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: habitat , planet , noetic , memetic , higher state or toposophic .

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Kelarc

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: the Reformulation , Sophic League , Ontology , xenobiological.

I suggest adding some related articles to Kelarc.

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Garden of Paradise Cluster

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Ararat , Old Earth , Mysterians , Hamilton Institute , photosynthesis , microecologies ,

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Fractal Brotherhood, The

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Buddhistic , Sophic League , deep space , the sects of inconsequence , nirvana ,

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Sophism (Sophic League)

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Sufism and cybersufism , Stella Umma, Neotaoism , Penglai Empire,  habitats, Buddhist , the Questionings of the Universal Church, Genetekker biotantra, Hermeticism, Etodism, Cosmism, Nuagism, and more. spiritual transcendence , old Earth , Empires period , memeticity , habitats , Nexus , clade and phyle , diamondoid ,

Hermeticism, Hermeticist - [article]

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: phyle , middle first Federation ,  Old Earth , emanationist cosmology , zones of thought (also called sephirot) , Cyberhermeticism , toposophic or singularity grade , Neohermeticism , sephirah .

Sophic Materialism - [article]

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: pantheistic or spiritual-materialist mystical, religious, or esoteric path common in the Sophic League, the TRHN .

Samsara - [article]

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Sophic.

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Cosmism

Typo: alter --> later.

Suggested changes: "21st and 22nd centuries of the Earth common era."  --> Old Earth. Also AT.
psycho-historical reconstruction. --> cliological.
Add  related articles section.

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: pantheism , Infotech , hacker baselines, transCyberian cyborgs, Gibsons , AI , singularity-grade AIs , artilects , hyperturing , virches , Sol System , Cyborgs , a.t. , luddist , Kuiper Belt , Oort cloud , nanite plague , Clade Rigel .

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Etodism

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: First Federation.

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Chiri

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: conversion drive.

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Nuage, Nuagism

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: memeticity , Old Earth , First Federation Era.

Magusism - [article]

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Occult, Occultism, Occultist, memeticity , wetware , transapientech augments .

Occult Philosopher - [article]

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: Sophic league.

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Occult, Occultism, Occultist

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: meme-complexes , stars, planets, gems, colors, chakras, elements, toposophic kingdoms, and phyles , Universal Mind .

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One Soul Movement

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: IA (Intelligence Augmentation) , backups , hypertech , copy , memetic , clades .

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Mechanists, Mechanism

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: philosophy and metaphysics , Industrial Age , memetic , wet , dry , bioists , m-life , hylotech , hylonanotech , biotech , vecs , Sephirotic hypercultures , Metasoft Version Tree , Zoeific Biopolity ,

Materialism - [article]

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: ril , vir , MPA .

Meatling - [article]

The article need hyperlinks in the text. For example: vecs, clades, bionts, cyborgs .